So as I look back through my blogs, I am coming to an amazing
realization that my writing style has well, stayed pretty much the same. I do
not believe that I have made any sort of huge change in how I write. It may
have taken me a few posts to realize it, but the class blog assignments are
much more relaxed than any other assignments I have done in the past. I suppose
that I have relaxed my grammar slightly and now I may be letting ideas flow a
little more freely, and I think that this is a good thing. As far as the
colloquialisms that accompany most blogs, not class blogs necessarily, but
blogs in general, I am making a conscious effort to avoid them. I feel that
even this is a fairly relaxed setting formal grammar rules should still apply. I
want to have confidence in anything and everything that I am going to put on
the internet that could potentially be traced back to me at a later time. Even
on facebook, I try to keep things appearing professional, regardless of the
media. I have always been told to only let things be seen that you would be
comfortable with the world seeing and I intend to keep living by that rule. To
me, blogs are just another way to express feelings or opinions on or about a
subject and should be treated similarly to any other assignment. My theory is
if you always present yourself in a respectable manner, you will not have
trouble presenting yourself when it is important to be respectable.
Monday, February 20, 2012
Monday, February 13, 2012
Peer Editing
With the start of peer editing, I thought we were going to
end up doing more of the same kind of editing that I did in high school. I was
wrong; we were supposed to be doing a fresh style of editing
where we would comment only on content and not focus on things that can easily
be changed at the end. I will say that we did focus more on content than I had
in the past, but I don’t know if I set my expectations too high or what exactly
my problem was but everything did not play out as I thought it would. I guess I
had assumed that I would be able to make some profound comments about my peers
essays and vice versa, but it just is not so. Please do not misunderstand me,
everybody had very helpful things to say and tips to give, but it was just not
as mind blowing as I had anticipated. Anyways, that being said, I do like the
fact that we are not even really allowed to comment or correct grammatical
issues. This definitely helps the writer focus on what he/she really needs to
change content wise. Also, from the editing point of view, it makes it a
challenge to find good points to make about the paper without the easy out of
circling all of the issues and fixing the misspelled words. I am not sure how
much I have learned at this point, but I feel that as the year goes on, editing
will become more and more helpful from both perspectives.
Wednesday, February 1, 2012
Technology and Evolution
Oh technology, you are the future of our species, constantly
improving, and I hate you. I don’t hate all technology and I realize that
technology makes my life so much more convenient every day but I wish some
things had never been invented or at least released to the public.
Portable GPS is one of my least favorite
things available for consumer use. It helps people get where they need to go
when they do not know their way. I understand the trouble it saves some people
but I honestly believe that it creates bigger problems than the ones it solves.
GPS can be very useful if trying to find your way in a strange city but should
not be used to find your way to the grocery store. I know people who do not
know how to navigate their own neighborhood because they have become dependent
on the device to get them to even the easiest locations to find. People have
started to lose the ability to successfully navigate the world that they live
in and rely solely on technology. I believe that someone should at least be
able to find their way home no matter where they are. I still use paper maps if
I do not know where I am going.
Smart phones are one of the worst
inventions of all time. No more are the days of sitting around with your
friends and arguing about mundane facts. Somebody always has to be the dick
that pulls out their iphone and ends all the fun. Also people have become
attached to their phones wherever they are. With people texting, tweeting,
facebooking, and searching the internet on their phones, the roads are
terrifying. I have a flip phone and have used GPS once, with disastrous
results. I hate when I find myself texting and prefer talking on the phone.
With all the convenience of
technology today I honestly believe people have gotten lazier. The more
technology does, the less we have to do, the less we have to use our brains,
and the less we know about the world. I really am not trying to say anything
against people who use this technology but I think it is something to think
about. I would hate to see the world get to a point where we start to lose
capabilities. If you have ever seen the movie Idiocracy, you know what I am
talking about. It is a bit extreme, but brings up a valid point.
(Just to be clear, this is just how
my mind works. I do not take this seriously. I am not a nut.)
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